BizEnglish4日目。まだまだ成長は感じられない…。

投稿62日目。本日3月4日。木曜日。

今日は差し入れの日らしい。

BizReach Campus経由で就活の相談に乗ったり、アメリカとのミーティングがあったり、社内ツールの講習を受けたり、課長との1on1があったりとミーティングの多い一日だった。

では今日のBizEnglishの振り返りをします。

BizEnglish4日目

今日でBizEnglish4日目。昨日は目標を立てたが、今日はThe IBC pattern (Application in Speaking and Writing)という文章を読んで、それに従ってお題に対する自分の考えを書くという宿題だった。

IBCとはIntroductionとBodyとConclusionの頭文字で、文章の構成を表しています。

今日はこの構成に基づいた文章でWritting, Speakingの宿題です。

宿題

What do you think is the most fascinating city? (Writing Practice)

Introduction: I think Ofuna is the most fascinating city.

Body: (Reason 1) Convenient to go anywhere.

(explanation) there is a terminal station.

(Reason 2) it is easy to live in

(explanation) the cost of living is low.  

Conclusion: Ofuna is the most fascinating city.

I think Ofuna is the most fascinating city. 

There is a terminal station, which can reach some of  larger stations and sightseeing spots in less than an hour.  It takes less than an hour to get to Shinagawa and Sinjuku and other business districts, and only 20 minutes to sightseeing spots such as Enoshima and Kamakura. Besides, it is easy to live in because the cost of  food and housing is lower than Tokyo. So, you can work for a company in Tokyo while living in Ofuna. because of these reasons, Ofuna is the most fascinating city.

*What is the best memory you have as a child? (Speaking Practice. Fill out the outline only.)

Introduction: The best memory I have as a child is a festival in my hometown.

Body: (Reason 1) it is fun.

(explanation) Participate in the festival with my friends.

(example) one friend played lion dance, and another played a Japanese drum, and the others played bamboo pipes.

(Reason 2) I got some money.

(explanation) reward for helping the festival.

(example) I got 6000 yen.

Conclusion: The memory of the festival remains strongly in my mind.

スポンサーリンク

添削後

修正は赤字

I think Ofuna is the most fascinating city. There is a terminal station, which can reach some of  the larger stations and sightseeing spots in less than an hour.  It takes less than an hour to get to Shinagawa, Sinjuku and other business districts.  and  It takes only 20 minutes to sightseeing spots such as Enoshima and Kamakura. Besides, it is easy to live in because the cost of  food and housing is lower than Tokyo. So, you can work for a company in Tokyo while living in Ofuna. Because of these reasons, Ofuna is the most fascinating city.

感想

今日はIBC patternに基づいて返答をする練習だった。明日もこれをするらしい。

英語で話すのは難しいなぁ。

考えながら話すとどうしても詰まってしまうし、単語が出てこなかったりするけど、講師が待ってくれるのでありがたい。

今日は50分が早く感じた。

おわりに

今週ものこり1日!!明日で終わりだ。

あっそういえば、今日はひかりTVでもBOOKOFFでもPS5が外れた。

ほんとにいつ当たるんだ…。

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